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Cygnus Bazza
Nice touch to include that, but you might like to drop in a comma after 'Ma'am' and take the one out in the last sentence, so it all looks spot-on.
 
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Cygnus Bazza wrote:

Nice touch to include that, but you might like to drop in a comma after 'Ma'am' and take the one out in the last sentence, so it all looks spot-on.


Just spotted this and thanks for the heads-up. I've added the missing comma after 'Ma'am' but in this instance I think the Oxford comma in the last sentence works best so am going to leave that one in.

Blown away by today - everything planned to the smallest detail and so moving to see the crowds lining what seemed to be every inch along the way of Her Majesty's final journey to her well-deserved rest. Even for those who aren't monarchists, an amazing shared experience being a part of history and British pageantry, I thought.
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